I am showing different moods with shoes and exploring the art of ad pictures. I will be showing this by the placement of shoes and with leading lines. I want to make people look at the shoes and want them.
I love the variety of shoes and placement. The shoes on the car with the brown sky is the strongest picture in the series. Some of the pictures are a bit blurry like the first one of the baby shoes; I would start with a stronger picture.
I really like all of your images! They are all really strong and clear. One picture I would change would either be the 11th or 12th image because they are of the same shoes. Other than that they are perfect! Good job!
Your pictures look like they should be in magazines! They're beautiful :) the only thing I would change is the last two are super similar, but besides that, great job!
I really like the editing and story in the picture with martins shoes up on the desk. It has more story then some of the other ones and is really interesting
Jessica, super great job! Pictures three and seven are absolutely amazing, they look professional. I really like how you tied in the color schemes of the shoes with the setting, it really helps develop a mood. Great job choosing a variety of shoes, they're rockin' :) Nicely done!!
I love the idea and the photos all look super professional. I'd suggest swapping out one of the photos of the shoe rack, they're a bit less dynamic than the rest.
Jessica, i think all your pictures are great, you did a really good job creating a theme with each photo. I do agree with maggie about the last 2 pictures. I would either change the order they are in or switch one out. Also i feel like your first photo is a little out of place because a lot of the other shoes are more adult. Other then that i think you did awesome :)
I love the first photo, and the seventh one too. You did amazing! These shoes are all really pretty too :). I think you should maybe switch out the last one because it doesnt feel as strong as all the other ones, but all in all its great.
I know my last two pictures are simmilar I am not sure this is the order I will kepp them in. I first put them in a diptic but malak said two keep them seprate that's why they are like that.
I love the variety of shoes and placement. The shoes on the car with the brown sky is the strongest picture in the series. Some of the pictures are a bit blurry like the first one of the baby shoes; I would start with a stronger picture.
ReplyDeleteI really like all of your images! They are all really strong and clear. One picture I would change would either be the 11th or 12th image because they are of the same shoes. Other than that they are perfect! Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour pictures look like they should be in magazines! They're beautiful :) the only thing I would change is the last two are super similar, but besides that, great job!
ReplyDeleteYou love for shoes is super clear from these photos! I think you did a great job taking pictures of them.
ReplyDeleteI really like the editing and story in the picture with martins shoes up on the desk. It has more story then some of the other ones and is really interesting
ReplyDeleteI like the shoe fetish you got going on. They are all clear shots and I really like the variety of the shoes.
ReplyDeleteJessica, super great job! Pictures three and seven are absolutely amazing, they look professional. I really like how you tied in the color schemes of the shoes with the setting, it really helps develop a mood. Great job choosing a variety of shoes, they're rockin' :) Nicely done!!
ReplyDeleteI love the idea and the photos all look super professional. I'd suggest swapping out one of the photos of the shoe rack, they're a bit less dynamic than the rest.
ReplyDeleteJessica, i think all your pictures are great, you did a really good job creating a theme with each photo. I do agree with maggie about the last 2 pictures. I would either change the order they are in or switch one out. Also i feel like your first photo is a little out of place because a lot of the other shoes are more adult. Other then that i think you did awesome :)
ReplyDeleteI like that you related your concentration so much to your own personal life. I especially like the seventh photo. It's my favorite.
ReplyDeleteI love the first photo, and the seventh one too. You did amazing! These shoes are all really pretty too :). I think you should maybe switch out the last one because it doesnt feel as strong as all the other ones, but all in all its great.
ReplyDeleteI know my last two pictures are simmilar I am not sure this is the order I will kepp them in. I first put them in a diptic but malak said two keep them seprate that's why they are like that.
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